Hi Maxi,
I´m writing this e-mail to tell you that I am on the space. Won a ticket for a holiday where I want to and I decided to go on a space tour.This is fantastic .The best of it all is the landcape of the Earth that is faboluos.
My time on the computer is over. I will tell you more about my holiday when I return.
bye
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Good! Please correct: "Hi, Maxi" " I'm writing...I ...in space." " I ...a ticket ...I ...I ...a space ..." "The...the landscape...fabulous." "My...Iyou more...I...""Bye"
Matais: Although you have corrected some of your mistakes, there are still some you haven't corrected yet (Starting with the capital letters in the title!). Please do it again. Susan
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