Dear Mina: 
I'm here in castle Dracula and i’m not having a good time. Things are very strange here because many people told me that there are powerfull creatures called ‘vampires’ and Count Dracula is one of them. He has a strange behavior. He is outside all day, but I can’t go out. I just can read a book or walk around the cold and solitary rooms of the castle. I’m really scared and I’m trying to find the way to scape from this castle... And I promisse I will. Anyway, i need you to know that I’ll be safe. I miss you.
Jonathan
I'm here in castle Dracula and i’m not having a good time. Things are very strange here because many people told me that there are powerfull creatures called ‘vampires’ and Count Dracula is one of them. He has a strange behavior. He is outside all day, but I can’t go out. I just can read a book or walk around the cold and solitary rooms of the castle. I’m really scared and I’m trying to find the way to scape from this castle... And I promisse I will. Anyway, i need you to know that I’ll be safe. I miss you.
Jonathan
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Nice work, Roo!! Please change: "...I'm... " ...powerful..." "...escape ...promise..." "...I ..."
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